less cringe on glagne

blog/templates/landing.html

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 {{define "landing-content"}}
-      <div class="landing-grid">
+<div class="landing-grid">
   <section class="hero">
-        <h2 class="hero-title">Forging systems from controlled chaos.</h2>
+    <h2 class="hero-title">A Technophile, forging systems from controlled chaos.</h2>
     <p class="hero-sub">
       Engineering, music, and experiments connected under one namespace.
       This site is the central entry point to everything running on <strong>chaosmith.systems</strong>.
@@ -10,23 +10,23 @@
     <div class="hero-grid">
       <div class="pill">
         <span>Engineering</span>
-            Modular input devices, VR / XR tooling, custom infra.
+        Modular devices, XR, custom infra.
       </div>
       <div class="pill">
         <span>Audio</span>
-            Cinematic strings, deathstep textures, dreadful vibes.
+        Cinematic strings, deathstep, dread.
       </div>
       <div class="pill">
         <span>Labs</span>
-            Prototypes, agents, data stacks, weird side projects.
+        Prototypes, agents, weirder side projects.
       </div>
     </div>
 
     <div class="hero-footer">
       <a class="btn-primary" href="/blog/" hx-get="/blog/" hx-target="main" hx-push-url="true">View blog</a>
       <p class="subnote">
-            This is an evolving node. Expect broken links, work-in-progress bs,
-            and the occasional cursed experiment.
+        This is node is evolving. Expect broken links, work-in-progress bs,
+        and occasional weirdness.
       </p>
     </div>
   </section>
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
           <span class="list-tag">symbolic engine</span>
         </li>
         <li>
-              <span class="list-label">Modular VR / XR input</span>
+          <span class="list-label">Void Drifter</span>
           <span class="list-tag">hardware</span>
         </li>
         <li>
@@ -66,5 +66,5 @@
     </div>
   </aside>
   <img src="ABSTRACTS.webp" style="box-shadow: 0 4px 24px rgba(0,0,0,0.6); border-radius: 6px;" />
-      </div>
+</div>
 {{end}}